Demetrius: are we awake? Helena: yes? Hermia: yes definitely; Lysander: think so (4.1.186-198) #MoonMad #SlowShakespeare

DEMETRIUS   These things seem small and undistinguishable,

Like far-off mountains turned into clouds.

HERMIA         Methinks I see these things with parted eye,

When everything seems double.

HELENA                                 So methinks;

And I have found Demetrius, like a jewel

Mine own, and not mine own.

DEMETRIUS                           Are you sure

That we are awake? It seems to me

That yet we sleep, we dream. Do not you think

The duke was here, and bid us follow him?

HERMIA         Yea, and my father.

HELENA                                 And Hippolyta.

LYSANDER     And he did bid us follow to the temple.

DEMETRIUS   Why then, we are awake. Let’s follow him,

And by the way let us recount our dreams.

([Exeunt] lovers.)       (4.1.186-198)

A final quartet from the lovers, its stichomythic line divisions suggesting the two couples’ unity and harmony once more. But they’re still entirely hazy, not surprisingly, as to what’s been going on, even Helena and Hermia, who have only sleep-deprivation and emotional exhaustion rather than almighty hangovers to contend with. Demetrius begins lyrically, but hesitantly: these things seem small and undistinguishable, like far-off mountains turned into clouds. The night’s events are slipping away from him, his memories fuzzy and vague; he’s not sure about anything, can’t make things out, as if they’re at the limits of perception; he’s not even sure what’s just happened. Hermia’s unsure too: methinks I see these things with parted eye, when everything seems double. We’re back on a double date, it seems; that’s good, right? So methinks—Helena seems more positive—and I have found Demetrius, like a jewel, mine own, and not mine own. Not her own because she’s not sure of him? because they’re not married yet? because he is still in possession of himself, rather than the weird, claustrophobic object of her obsession? Are you sure that we are awake? It seems to me that yet we sleep, we dream, wonders Demetrius. Gosh, there are bits coming back to me, perhaps? But—do you not think the duke was here, and bid us follow him? Yea—yes!—and my father, offers Hermia. Things are falling into place, and we can’t all be having the same dream, can we? (You’d think so, but…) And Hippolyta—yes, she was here too! adds Helena. And he did bid us follow to the temple: so we’d better get a move on, is Lysander’s contribution. Why then, we are awake, we all agree, concludes Demetrius. Good. Let’s follow him, and by the way let us recount our dreams. Sharing session, obviously, but we REALLY need to get our story straight before anyone starts asking any more awkward questions…

Exit the lovers, in whatever state of undress and dishevelment—and wonder—seems most appropriate. To a hot shower, a bacon sandwich (or whatever morning after the night before breakfast seems most fitting) and a great deal of strong coffee.

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  1. Helena’s last words.
    ‘Mine own, and not mine own’🤔 – I’ve settled (possibly settled) on ‘mine own and yet, this isn’t my old Demetrius, this Demetrius is new’.

    Hermia’s last word is ‘father’, he who started all this.

    Yes, there solution to the problem of whether they are dreaming is that they all agree so they cannot be dreaming. But they are now going to recount their dreams and find out they all agree!

    ‘And by the way let us recount our dreams.’😊

    1. I was struck that the Arden 3 editor (that’s the edition I’m using) was much more negative about this exchange between the lovers, especially Helena. I do like the idea of them trying to get their stories straight and worrying that it’s been a mass hallucination…

      1. My Arden has ‘like a precious thing found, and therefore of uncertain ownership’

        So something like

        I have found my Demetrius as I would find a jewel. Mine own (finders keepers) and not mine own (someone else’s) 🤔

        Or, as I suggest.

        I have found my Demetrius to be like a jewel. As we can all see it’s my own Demetrius and yet he’s no longer like my own Demetrius, thankfully!

        I’m imagining Helena taking a step back to admire Demetrius as if he’s just lost weight on a diet😊.

        1. ha! Ard3 has ‘like a jewel found by chance and kept without secure title (Malone, comparing AC 4.12.8–9: ‘hope and fear / Of what he has and has not’). Helena is still unsure of Demetrius’ firm love’. I’m not convinced? and I’m not sure it matters much in context; they’re all a bit nonsensical at this point… (but I like the idea that she’s admiring him!)

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